Thesis Statement#
Dom: I personally don’t care much about these, but collecting advice from Laurie / Will / Brad who do.
(i.e., follow these pointer if they are on your committee)
Will#
- Will: don’t need to define every term in the statement, do it in the paragraphs before
- Will: can you demonstrate the statement?
Brad#
- Brad: a statement should be valid for eternity, not just for the coming 5 years
- Brad: make it active voice